Excellent entry. You manage to get the reader sympathetic with you immediately and keep them. By the end of the story, I was annoyed.
I think it’s obvious that I’m a guy considering I agree with the disembodied voice. I mean, come on, he left a path. =P
JP, you are such a guy. ;-)
Ha! I have had this fight.
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