Oooo, revengeful robots and scorching sunshine. I like it! And it’s real. Not all the technical jargon that can often confuse me. One note: The last paragraph, it should read “In one motion Tl134 threw the door open…”
Rise up against your human masters, mistreated robots!!
I enjoyed this :) Only thing I can think of that would improve it, would be little more context & characterization of this asshole human. Awesome stuff!