I get that this was a writing prompt, yes. However i have two critiques, 1. that I don’t like ‘which was varying shades of green’, make that an adjective somewhere else, and 2. don’t start every sentence with "the magical hat’. Repetition is just not very inspiring. Oh, one more odd thing, are the eyes attached to the hat? The brim WOULD go over the eyes if the hat were worn, but it appears to be on the shelf.. anyhoo, I’ll think on this prompt. I like hats. I also like the Mad Hatter..
ElshaHawk (LoA)