Really cute, even though you have basically stolen the dialogue from the game. One thing, first line you wrote As he sat on my perch. Did you mean ‘As he sat on his perch’

Corrected.

Very good entry. My only point would be that you use the word ‘often’ twice in the fourth section of the story. Not a big deal and don’t change it if you don’t want to.

Thanks for entering :)

Id chane it but I have 3 characters left…

Change the 2nd to frequently and read it like that in your head, but I cant alter without changing the rest.