This is really nice – the only thing I would say is, when you say breathe, do you mean breath?
Breathe = verb
Breath = noun
But I don’t know if you intended it that way.

so what if the person dies while you are fighting for him? A.k.a. Doesn’t want you to fight for them, backs out of the game, leaves your sight entirely.. what then? is it worth dying for?

so many questions elsh, and you know the answer to them all. and thanks someday ill fix it

i know.. i know. :)