This is awesome, the start of the career of a music producer maybe? great work though, i really was reading it like it was someones bio, very real.

Very nice drop-off ending there. Totally leaves room for some more. This also seems like another one of those stories that could start a book.

Thanks for the comments James & N. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

Although I love the linguistics and ideas behind the story, the link to the challenge is a little strained.
In other words I think it’s a brilliant story but not exactly linked in with the challenge. I’ll still rate 5, though :)