Karen’s too fast for Vicki’s attempt assassination! I might sequel to continue the action =D

I like it, and I like where this is headed. No one is really a clear cut good guy or bad guy, and the readers aren’t aware of motivations either. This could go anywhere. Good sequel.

@ Gradual: Please do

thanks robert! I so have the sequel thing down..

I liked the stuff at the beginning, all the little details to let us know how she is evaluating the situation. The end bit felt a bit quick, but still worked.

yeah well i was running out of characters!