oh sinister final line! so who broke the china?

Someone will have to sequel to find out.

A nice little character study here – you really get the feeling that this loss, this desperation could be channelled in any direction – bunny-boiling is certainly possible!

Maybe a little clichéd in parts, but the originality of the cross-gender love triangle hinted at in the last line adds lots of sequel potential…

MH :)

Cross-gender MH? I didn’t get that. It sounded like a woman having a fit. I wish I didn’t, but I know that envy of the other woman and it’s captured brilliantly. That addiction to their love, that need for their touch.
Thinking of sequelling, but I say that too often, don’t I? It is intriguing, but damn it, when I sequel something I get the feeling I’m ruining it.

Don’t be afraid to sequel! You’ll do fine, it’s worth a shot.

I feel like I’ve really stereotyped this story now – but I swear to God the first time I read it I picked up on an indicator that the character was male.

I’m going senile in my old age, clearly.

I still think it would make for an interesting story continuation though! MH :)

Not every love thing I do is gay, Ed.

o.o

But, I’ll leave this one to the reader’s thoughts.

Well, maybe because I’m a girl and Ed;s a boy we see this differently…