I think someone’s been watching I am Legend.

Very cool although a little typical I feel. Also, I think that the ‘already nameless’ part should be combinated with another sentence.

Yeah, when I was writing it, it did feel like I was borrowing pretty heavy from I am Legend, but in all honesty, it’s been a little while since I’ve watched it :D

Thanks for reading! And thanks for the critique. This was my first time at trying my hand at the zombie genre :D

And as for the “already nameless” part, that was part of a sentence, a slip of the finger made it a full stop instead of a comma :S

Familiar ground, but you did a really good job with the sense of futile resistance and an utter lack of hope that pervades the genre.

This is crying out for a sequel.

Very mysterious, and great job describing the depth of the fear that these people feel.