This may yet turn into a series.

I’d be happy to oblige Sam :D
Great job Robot, but it the first line it sould be 1 or one stick of C4, not I.

Ah it seems as though my editing has taken a ghastly turn for the worse.

Mistakes have been fixelated.

Poor Steve, he should have checked his gun. I can see this as a series too. Nice follow-up on the original. I like the imagery of Steve’s demise and our hero’s quick thinking by grabbing Steve’s weapon. You have created a sense of excitement and anticipation.