Cool!

Lucid dreams are the BEST!

I think that you may have accidentally put a comma where you had meant an exclamation mark at the end of Tom’s final dialogue.

You are so correct. Fixed! Thanks! And yes, lucid dreams rock.

Lucid dreams are so cool, ’cos you get to control what happens :)

Good work!

I like this. Not just because I’m a fan of lucid dreams, but because it’s a nice idea that the realism of lucidity is somehow connected to the real, the spiritual or the other worldly.

“You’re just a Dreamer. Don’t know why I’m even talking to you.” That’s a great line. The sort of line any lucid dreamer might hear, and be forced to wonder about the reality of the “other”.

Thanks for the comments! I think other people have theorized about dreams being another world as opposed to a mental state, but I find it to be an intriguing idea. And of course this was a real dream, as per the challenge, with a couple of details added so it made more sense as a story. Anyway, thanks again!