This whole series has been awesome.
Really? I’m glad you like it! This was my first foray into the genre, and I’m glad that I had some good writers like Robot and Shu Sam to help me out :D
There shouldn’t be a period after “surrounded by zombies”. Should be one sentence with the next. By whole I’m sure that you mean hole. Lastly, you need to replace ‘the’ with ‘that’ in ‘at the point’. Errors aside, this is a marvelous way to continue our saga. I like the title a lot. I can’t wait to see what else will unfold. Robertson should jump in on this action.
There shouldn’t be a period after “surrounded by zombies”. Should be one sentence with the next.
By whole I’m sure that you mean hole.
Lastly, you need to replace ‘the’ with ‘that’ in ‘at the point’.
Errors aside, this is a marvelous way to continue our saga. I like the title a lot.
I can’t wait to see what else will unfold.
Robertson should jump in on this action.
Ah thanks :) Edited for correctness :D I was a little tired by that point. I had just finished nearly 2 hours of exams, and my brain was shot. Maybe I shouldn’t write when tired…
Ah thanks :) Edited for correctness :D
I was a little tired by that point. I had just finished nearly 2 hours of exams, and my brain was shot. Maybe I shouldn’t write when tired…
N. Robertson
Luke Nicolaou
The Third Robot
Luke Nicolaou