Sad ending. I like the tone. It sounds somewhat like someone telling a story as an illustration.

First off. Very well done. I really enjoyed reading this. It’s not too specific but it doesn’t need to be. You focus on her emotion and such and enter her mind.

I don’t if that makes sense but I’m much to tired to revise or think.

Secondly, PARAGRAPHS OR I WILL KILL YOU WITH LAZERS!!!

P.S. welcome to Ficly.

The ideas presented are unique enough that they kept my attention throughout. The second half, of the second to last sentence doesn’t quite make sense to me though. I don’t know how you know what you’re not supposed to think about. Still, it was written well enough.

Vivid, dreamlike take on the phenomenon of writer’s block, as I read it.

Innocence marred by her own defense mechanism. Sad and true. The short phrasing is perfect for conveying innocence, and the revelation of the immovable wall is much like we realize in a dream the meaning behind a symbol. Your descriptions are great!

I second everything said by TTR. Also, I would consider not opening the piece with “So,” but that’s up to you.

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I love this, it is just exactly how I am feeling, love everything about it.

Her mind has acted independent of her for her own good and protection – but she still thinks of that one person.