This is going nowhere good.

You need another ‘to’ in the first sentence and the punctuation needs some editing in the second.

Anyways, I liked it. It was original and has the potential to really crank up the creep factor in following sequels.

Thanks for picking up the mistakes. I chalk it up to it’s 2am.

I don’t know what it is but it feels weirdly awesome to get into this guys head. I wouldn’t want to live there, but a visit isn’t too bad. haha

Thanks again!