Cute. It took me a minute to get the end but when I did, I chuckled- very clever. You also beat me to the challenge! Your solution to the limitations of the challenge was interesting. On a side note, I originally dropped the f-bomb here too and I normally don’t need it for ficlets. It got cut in the end but I thought it was an interesting observation.

Nice. I liked how you used dialogue to back-fill the story so the reader could follow along without revelaing the ending to soon. This was unexpected and well done.

Loved the reference to Pete. LOL

nice twist at the end, letting us all in on the joke about her being an angel. haha. and the best part, they are arguing over something that is so far gone..

Haha… I, too, enjoyed the surprise at the end. The dialogue definitely said it all!