I think that you have too many characters, and in the beginning its difficult to get bearings on the situation. That works itself out towards the end though,

I liked the last bit much more than the first. It has kind of a hopelessness comedy vibe that I enjoy.

And you might want to revise your 4th line.

I enjoyed this very much. It made me laugh. I particularly liked the disdain in the 5th line.

I did not find the dialogue difficult to follow but I tend to talk too much so maybe I have just had a lot of practice.

As always, I appreciate the feed back.
@ Third: I partially agree with you on too many characters but I wanted to challenge myself. Originally, there was five of them. I also revised the 4th line. Does that work better?
@Paige: I’m happy that you enjoyed it. Dialogue has never been my strong point and I was reluctant to enter the challenge until the first three lines came to me.

Quick, I think you got the characters down now, it was easy for me to tell them apart. The urgency of the situation was well conveyed. I think you did great considering the challenge was to use talking heads. :)

Nice work with this! I love the dark-humor aspect. I agree that there might have been one too many characters, but it was still a great entry. Thanks for playing!