Wow.

Great story dude, very deep.

Wonderful little piece. I think we’ve all had dreams like that at one time or another, going back to a school. It’s even stranger when the details that come in the dream are ones that have been forgotten by the waking mind.

Excellent.

Dreams are so strange when compared to reality that it can be difficult to explain. You don’t have that problem though and and you inject a very appropriate amount of oddness.