I was a little confused the first read through. It was interesting enough to read it a second time and once I figured it out, I like it a lot more. Clever way to get around the restrictions of the challenge.
Haha… awkward! Like TR said, it’s fun to fill in the blanks. I think you’re missing a few commas here and there— such as after “Well” in the third line— but other than that, nice job!
I have to admit, once I hit line 5 I was wondering just how far you were going to push his phone call, but then I laughed from line 6 to the end. Great perspective!
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