Ahahaha. Now the question is did the couple laugh or were they mad?
That depends… if anybody pranked me on April Fools’. :D
I liked the ending =)
This twist was EXTREMELY unexpected. I like. However, I can’t put my finger on it, but I feel like you could have delivered the ending a little better. Maybe with more tension or something because it seemed like it just all of a sudden happened.
This twist was EXTREMELY unexpected. I like.
However, I can’t put my finger on it, but I feel like you could have delivered the ending a little better. Maybe with more tension or something because it seemed like it just all of a sudden happened.
N. Robertson
intoxicatedsmiLes
Scrawler's Secret
The Third Robot