Ekm. Inspired by a Scottish ballad. Not sure if I’m supposed to mature it.

It was a bit of an odd feeling to the story, but I liked it.

You didn’t use all of the characters but I don’t think that you needed to.

My only commenteer!

Thanks. :DD

I would suggest spacing after screaming so that it is more defined when she hissed. That is my only criticism. Simple, yet touching. I am impressed with the fact that you don’t need all of your chars. I have trouble not using my allotted 1024.

Thanks. :D

I edited the story.