Amazing as usual. This is really deep.

Great imagery and sentiment in this piece. Was that a nurse or comrade? either way, it works.

Lots of great description here…. I love the line: “… so deep it defied description”.

The only thing I would say, would be to just be careful not to fall into anything cliche… definitely slippery at times.

@Elshahawk: I didn’t have any specific idea.

@Kay-Tease: It was very difficult avoiding cliches, yes. At times it got pretty close.

Best War/Historical