DON’T PUT COMMAS AT THE END OF SPEECH WITHOUT A PERSON!!!!
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Scream over, I really liked it. Confusing, though. Is there another person in there or are all the people in his/her imagination?

it was a nail file! :P I think that is an odd final line. In an elevator? really? where? I mean that just provokes the tigress.

Just two people. They go back and forth.

It says ‘we’ which is why I assumed there were somehow more than two people.

We as in “the ignorant people”. He’s saying we because he’s part of those ignorant people.

Ah! I must be one of those ignorant people. Forgive my ignorance.

Good times, hangin’ out in the elevator… yeah… Haha.

Anyway, I enjoyed this, and I particularly like the last line. I can imagine the headlines the next morning: Man Killed in Elevator Frustration. Thanks for playing!

This was utter awesome-sauce, beginning, middle and end. Full marks from the wift-meister.

Best line, “Don’t even remind me, God, if I had a knife…” Made me laugh as I have had that thought many times. Although my thoughts tend more toward murder than suicide but enought about me. This was funny. Hell really is other people.

One comment, it’s never a good idea to ask women if they have PMS when they are angry.

Good work here Gabe, a well developed dialogue… Those comebacks are characteristically cutting – and that lawyer character was a prime example of the kind of sassy character you write so well!

Always a pleasure to read – very good work, if a little confusing at the very end… MH :)

I really liked this story, I though that it wasn’t confusing at all and the dialogue just flowed along as if you could make a whole novel out of just dialogue.

I liked the last line, it made me laugh.