Comments on Baby Blue [12 word challenge] by Krulltar

theWallflower

This sounds pretty close to “For sale: baby shoes. Never worn.”
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
- 1 out of 5
THX 0477

That just sounded very sad and tragic.
- Posted almost 10 years ago.
Mostly Harmless

This is by no means worthy of a 1.

Similar subject matter to the Hemingway, potentially, depending on interpretation, but it’s an ambiguous yet tragic story in it’s own right – there’s a lot of power in this short space…

Bravo – MH :)
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
elvie suzuki

I agree with MH. I interpreted it as something different from Hemingway’s and it made a bigger impact on me. Choice of “crumbled” is … wow.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Darcey Issa Dorka

This is a stick of dynamite lit from both ends. Powerful image. Gave me goosebumps.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ItsMeChristina

How long did it take you to think of this? Brilliant job well done.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
The Cheshire Dog

These are some of the most blatant but powerfully ambiguous words ever. Well done, sir.
- Posted over 9 years ago.