Hey, this is turning out good. Well-paced action for Ficly size.

Thank you very much! I’ll try to keep that in mind for the rest of the story, whatever that may be. : )

good idea about the incense and the dogs! I think the ‘she came to a stop’ is kinda repetitive, since she had just decided to take a stand. I like the idea of an archeological dig that unearthed some voodoo magic and called the dogs!