a great stand alone, i love the part about pink turning to red gore..

Wow, that’s a powerful sequel. I love how the last line of my piece echoes in the first line of yours.

Thank you.

a wonderful contrast to thelostgirl’s prequel, and as Elsha mentioned, he details used in the juxtaposition of colors (from white to red, from pink to dark) were a wonderful addition.

btw, there’s no need to find a story of mine to comment on