Sciencefiction-y goodness. I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially your descriptions.

Epic. I think you deserve to win :D

Congrats on the win, dude. Well deserved.

Wow, thanks guys. I really didn’t expect to win, just wanted to get a good story out that I’d been thinking about for a while now. I’m really glad people enjoyed it.

very nice emotional poetic flow by using “I remember…”