Very exciting stuff, and I loved the little touch of real-feeling thought process as he’s a little miffed to not get credit for a cool move. That last sentence wound up a bit packed, but I know how the character limit can get.

Thanks. Yeah, it did get cramped. At first I didn’t pay attention and had it at 1100-something characters. And then I found out my text editor wasn’t counting returns so I had to cut another little bit.

Yes! It has not died!

Oh and 5 stars I give.

the whole story has been awesome, but I especially liked the tone of this one

Can’t believe I missed this. Awesome sauce.

Aw thanks.

Zombies, huh? Shudder. Nice work with this. Made me look over my shoulder as I read. :o)