Cute and sad and the all-too-true story of ill-fated love for the insecure. The switch to past tense in the middle didn’t work for me, but I’m not sure if you meant to. The whole thing did make for a kind of funny visual too.
Cute and sad and the all-too-true story of ill-fated love for the insecure.
The switch to past tense in the middle didn’t work for me, but I’m not sure if you meant to.
The whole thing did make for a kind of funny visual too.
Aw, that’s sad. I hope they get back together. As for the switch from past tense, I like it. I think “Horror” divides it up, too.
Aw, that’s sad. I hope they get back together.
As for the switch from past tense, I like it. I think “Horror” divides it up, too.
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