Comments on Trust is a Whisper by Robert Quick

Mostly Harmless

There’s so much going on behind this dialogue, and that’s a real strength of the piece…

Your characterisation is interesting, and I find your use of vocabulary stunning – some might think it’s a bit flowery but there is meaning and purpose driving it through – great work! MH :)
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
someday_93

The vocabulary is amazing…reminded me a bit of old English. I like this one a lot =]
- Posted over 9 years ago.
N. Robertson

Previous commenters echoed. Very strong dialog.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Music-Hearted

Ooh, intriguing. I really appreciate the formal diction of your dialogue— it reminds me a little of dear old Shakespeare, especially with “would” meaning “wish.”

Way to mix it up, and thanks for entering!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Paige Elizabeth

I also enjoyed the tone and word choice of this piece. Well done.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Krulltar

The other comments pretty much covered what I would say…5 pencil good
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Krulltar

The other comments pretty much covered what I would say…5 pencil good
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

nicely done! this started so innocently.. but obviously they brought the elephant in the room to light!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr.Gabriel

Sounds like the Native Americans talking to the Whites back then.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Yeah, Mr.G stole my point. Brilliant work!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5