Wow, that is awesome. Somehow, ths is everything I was thinking of when I wrote the first part.

This is really cool – I could feel the intensity, the way his brain was all over the place. I don’t really like sci-fi, but I like this series so far =]

This is a good break from the flurry of action and dialogue of the prequel. You do a good job with the dazed feeling of the MC.