Suicide is always a difficult thing – and you took on the double challenge of a difficult subject and a dialogue exclusive. Nicely done!

Wonderful.

I like how you use dialogue to bring out the topic. :D

Yeah, I know, its the challenge and all but still. It’s nice.

Ah. Suicide. What a horrible, horrible thing…

=[ Such a sad subject, but you did a nice job expressing it through dialogue.

Thanks for playing!

Damn.
But wow, that really packed a punch and left me feeling a little uncomfortable (but I mean that in the best way!) It seriously stirred up emotions.

Great job demonstrating how powerful words can be.

That was sad. Reads a bit like a morality tale for those callous youth who might say such things.

Neat trick using the spacing and italics to have a third person speaking without it getting all confusing in the absence of information outside the quotes.

Sad but true. Makes you think about the times you bitch about people, although these guys are real dickheads.
Echo @THX’s point.
Good work.

Congrats, you’ve won 2nd place in the Dialogue-Exclusive challenge! Great work and thanks for playing.