Has a nice olde school, swashbuckling tale sort of feel to it, with the possibility of fantasy or magic being involved.
that last sentence in the first paragraph felt a bit long.

Thanks for the comment and you’re right, that last sentence could do with shortening.

I imagine this to be in some poor part of London in the 1700s and it really sets the scene, although isn’t really a story in itself. Will you sequel?

I will sequel eventually, once I’ve figured how to continue it.