This has very good potential. Very mysterious and lets us know enough without knowing too much.

A few grammatical things, though.

President should be capitalized. He’s a proper noun.

There should be a comma after the second quote, because there is more afterwards.

Should be: the [P]resident’s advisor.

There should only be three dots, not six.

The first sentence in the first paragraph doesn’t make a lot of sense. It would flow better if it were: The “Wonder Drug”[,] as it was billed in late 2062, was "*t*he *c*ure *f*or *e*verything.

Also, I think you mean: the key to immortality was in the news feed.

And news feed isn’t one word.

Took the 1st, 3rd, 4th, and 5th suggestions,

2) I didn’t put the comma because it was switching from advisor to president.

5) I changed it around as I was naming headlines which most of the time the first letters in each words are caps.

6) In my story the “newsfeed” is a device and is one word.