A perfect example of the principle of ’Chekov’s Gun’ which I had a challenge about a while back – the shared ‘three down’ thing wasn’t just trivia, it was essential to the story, and I like that precision, it’s neat…
I’m not sure about your semi-colon use at the end of the third paragraph – but content-wise this was a good piece – well done – MH :)
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Mr.Gabriel
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))
Mr.Gabriel
ElshaHawk (LoA)
Elisabeth L. Davis(LoA)
Mostly Harmless