Comments on No man has ever by ReynoldsEco

Oy

Whoa,didn’t see THAT coming!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
lisaG

Made me shudder.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

congrats!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Spiderj

A twisted twist indeed!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Sneaky"LoA"Cleazy

Yuck..!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
jesteram

Ick. Ick. Ick.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Lone Writer

SCREAM CRINGE Ugh… ewww…….ack!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
OrangeOreos (LoA)

Awww….. Definitely a twist.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
JimF

I think it’s kind of overwritten. I appreciate what you’re trying to do — the flowery prose in the beginning is supposed to make the ending more nauseating — and that’s great. It does. I just think the opening couple of sentences could be a little tighter.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
ethelthefrog

Oof. Exquisitely nasty. Well done.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5