Comments on Amateur Pottery by Gradual Uprising {LoA}

Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Reflective, I like the extended metaphor. 1024 characters sure can go a long way down the page!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

this reminds me of the claymation on sesame street for some reason.. Oh i know, it was the simple language you used, “and I am going to touch it”. This was fun and had a nice moral.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
August Rode

The simplicity of the language and the expressions of potential in the first half of the work bring to mind someone that is at the early stages of their life, with their future entirely in front of them. Nice work, and a pleasure to build from.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

i love this poem.
i want to say so much and just rave about, but things i say wont do it justice.
so just how about maybe i’ll just say i love it. many pencils
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5