Interesting twist!
What might the dragons be wanted for…
The music night idea is an interesting point in the story.

ah, well, what can the commoner do to prevent the king from making his own choices?
Interesting perspective here, the commoner, it would be nice to interpose this with views from the castle for perspective.
I think you could have upped the ante with this series by adding more action, but it was very relatable in that the commoners are like us joe schmo’s who sit on our couches and ignore politics. :)

Don’t write this story off yet! Trust me, the characters will be getting deeply involved soon. Because this story is based upon a pseudo-roleplay, it’s taking time to develop.

Thanks for the interest and comments!