Eek, shot down in a second.
This story is so sweet. I think everyone has that moment at some point Wow, he’s eating oranges. I’m eating oranges. It must be fate. although this is obviously a bit more founded through surreal shared habits.
:)

I really like that the first reaction in your story was a feeling of weirdness when your charector is doing the same thing. It’s interesting, but forgive e if I never take your culinary advice.

For such a short story, it’s masterfully told, and yet it is the perfect length. It avoids unnecessary detail, nor does it omit any important. Well done!