I love it! This is awesome, and I can think of two possible ways this might go…I might have to write another sequel!

good, I’m glad. This was my first time writing a sequel to someone else’s story and I was hoping it would go ok.

Oh good work with this – taking the action from another perspective is an example of what sequelling on Ficly should be about – expanding the story, adding more depth, not just continuing…

Keeping Adam’s motives ambiguous was a good move, but I think I would have taken it further and not given him a name at all – the title’s a little weak – something like ‘A Curious Man’, might have left a little more room for interpretation…

But still, bravo on your first sequel – a stellar piece – MH :)

Thanks so much for the feedback, MH.

I think you’re right about not naming him. Something seems right about that. Ah well. Lesson learned. ;)

Also, I agree about the title. I’m trying to get better at coming up with titles which are more engaging.

oh wow, what a sequel! this character is all your own, and I’m looking forward to how you tow collaborate. :)

wow i am searching for other words but i think wow did it