Parfait!

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Do you not see how the comments for this are good and you get mad about my story? This is what I mean. This story has some grammar mistakes. You don’t correct them do you? Well for me you do.

Apparently, chris Chris chris doesn’t know what poem is, or the fact that they do’nt have the same grammar rules.

Perhaps we should just leave him and his persecution complex alone for a while.

Chris – if you have suggestions, just make them…if they’re constructive we really do care.

THZ 0477 this is constructive criticism. The correct grammar would be don’t, not “do’nt”, as you spelled it.

That’s a typo, leave it out. Comments aren’t 100% gramaticly correct…

We like this story, because it’s contradicting yours, which is downing all of us because we find the need to correct grammar. On a writing site, that’s what you do.

And it’s THX not, THZ.

Mr.Gabriel, That’s a typo, leave it out. Comments aren’t 100% grammaticly correct…

See, now you’re using that when it’s to your own benefit. That’s not what you were saying when others were making typos.

Now were you?

Exactly my point. Pj Deane was saying that it was a typo and not all comments are grammatically correct when it worked to his own benefit. But when I make a typo everyone gets on my case.

Before this goes any further, I want to clarify that my intention was not to gain attention or rile anyone up. I was inspired to write something effectively the opposite of chris Chris chris in hopes of making something worthwhile out of his/her negativity. Nothing more, nothing less.

Music-Hearted, I congratulate you for taking something full of hate and being inspired to make something beautiful.

Hey Chris want to do a bookfest with me? Thought it would give you something to do.
Hey Music Hearted, you did well.

There is no incorrect grammar for poetry. The grammar hounds have no teeth and the grammar nazi’s loose there swastikas in the world of poetry. Chris should at least learn to check his attitude and take of his shoes because poetry is hallowed ground where noones laws apply.

And music hearted you are incredible, a goddess amongst vagrants, you never cease to amaze me.

Thank you so much, Mighty-Joe. That means a lot, coming from you. =]

Heavy controversy on this one, from what I see of the comments above.

This poem makes every contributing word important. I really wish I could listen to it read with my eyes closed to better visualize what is being told.

Words indeed are not math, as you very elegantly point out.