This is an interesting beginning to a story, but I’d like to see it be developed a little more. Why are we being introduced to these characters? Are they going to interact? Really good descriptions- I really felt like I could see your characters =]
This is an interesting beginning to a story, but I’d like to see it be developed a little more. Why are we being introduced to these characters? Are they going to interact?
Really good descriptions- I really felt like I could see your characters =]
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