its amazing darling.
Thank you so much!
This is great! Just a couple of suggestions— I think there should be a comma after “eating it”, and you might consider replacing “I will never be that fun loving girl anymore” with “again”. Otherwise, great work!
Nice character study. I’d love to see a prequel or sequel to this. I feel like there is so much more that can be done. Nice job!
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