I like how you used The Book to connect the two characters. Although there were several typos and a few misworded sentences in this series, I liked this series. I did find it a bit rushed in parts, such as the death of the man’s daughter and his reaction to it, and some of the narrator’s statements were things she should couldn’t have known about. For example, in Monster 2 she commented on what people said to him or where he went.
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