inheritance? or ghost protagonist? Nice twist, adding perspective at the end to guide your sequeler. The second paragraph is the strongest, though scorch marks seem just as ominous, if not tell-tale as to why the house is abandoned, let alone the stains.
It seems strange that the protagonist watches his house and regards it with a sort of distance, rather than doing it up. A sort of mysteriousness surrounds him, and with its back story can we even trust that the narrator had nothing to do with its past? I love ambiguous stories like this.
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