the three part harmony is where this kind of goes ethereal.. i’m glad it ended in a dream, to match the crazy mood.

I love the hazy feel of it all, with the only standout things being the jade dragon and the white ribbon, which brought the couple together, sortof like a dream which ties it all up together in the last paragraph.
Possibly you mean an earthbound star rather than as earth bound star, but I’ve been wrong quite a lot lately!
Besides that I think this is one of your best ficlies Mr Quick!!

Thank you both, I am honored to continue to have readers such as you.
@ PJ Deane: Yes, you are correct. I had it that way to begin with but changed it at the last moment for reasons I cannot recall. Fixed now.