I wrote this poem just over a month ago for someone special. I’m quite happy with it, although the meter’s off in places and some of the metaphors are a little wonky. I think it’s one of my best poems.

I applaud how your rhyming doesn’t throw off the message. Heartfelt, and I’m sure that someone special agrees!

I like this alot. :) It reminds me of something my friends nick or josh would write about me. lol. Good Job!

now to put it to music.. :) I think it conveys great sentiment, love or deep affection, and concern. The meter being off just reminds me of song lyrics.. how they are sometimes off for the melody to work right..