This series is brilliant. You really complement each other in your writing. I can’t wait to see more!

Oh this guy is a sexual sadist or something? Weird that I read this tonight after watching a documentary about serial sadists, and it’s going in that direction. This really isn;t going where I was expecting.

Ooh. Sorry I’ve been a bit busy, but this is awesome! Creepy, yes, but awesome. Dude, you’re stretching me farther than I thought I could go…but I love it!

This is moving in a really good direction – creepy, and disturbing, but certainly interesting…

I think you’re challenging each other as writer’s as well, which is really good to see – Ficly is as much about improving in the long term as it is about achievement in the short, so bravo! MH :)

very disturbing, he forces them to “love” him by proxy of not wanting to murder another to save their own life.