I saw Colonel and Agent and I thought they were all policemen, took me a while to catch your intention. I think if you go way over-the-top with the characterization it will be clearer.

I’ve changed the character names, make it more reminiscent of “other” spy movies, so hopefully more people will get it :D

No monologuing? :)

Every secret agent’s worst nightmare – A super villain smart enough to just get on with the job in hand rather than talking about it for hours!

Nice work – the brevity worked really well – MH :)

Nicely done, short and sweet, and epitome of what any villain with half a brain would do at this moment in the action movie.

Much better! Just a grammar comment; it’s ‘get past my security’ (http://is.gd/bvY33)