Comments on Unravelling the case by H.S. Wift

C. Augusto Valdés

This sums up my feelings about police procedurals!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Luke Nicolaou

Haha, don’t you just love procedural cop shows?? :D

But then you missed out the final bit.

“But then we find out what we did it wrong and it was the person we only saw for 30 seconds!!”

:D
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Stovohobo

Thank you for reminding me of every teeth-gratingly repetitive police show on TV. Sigh.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

Looking past the immediate humour of the piece – Jack Sawyer is actually a really interesting character!

Cynical, disillusioned and witty, with a disdain for the TV programs which so humiliatingly simplify the complexity of his job – what a guy!

So well done – both for writing something which fits the challenge, and which, on further reading, emerges as a really interesting piece/character study in it’s own right… MH :)
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
THX 0477

Funny, and you can almost imagine him rattling it off in a ho-hum way, like all the fun has been taken out of it for him.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
C. Augusto Valdés

I have found these small challenges have some fleshed-out characters, and Jack Sawyer certainly fits the bill.
- Posted over 9 years ago.