Comments on Rebirth by smdasilva {LoA}

Mostly Harmless

In four sentences you paint some really vivid and well-crafted images – which makes me even more disappointed that it ends so quickly!

Nice contrasts between the idea of ‘rebirth’ and ‘graves’ – the ‘love’ you have for Spring, but then quite a bittersweet description of it – almost dark, with ‘barren trees’ and ‘cold wind’…

Very nice indeed – but I do think it could have done with a bit more – MH :)
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mostly Harmless

Ah, and, of course, welcome to Ficly!

You’ll feel right at home… As soon as you get a profile pic ;)
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
smdasilva {LoA}

Just a little something that I wrote back in early March that I thought was appropriate to the challenge.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Echo MH’s comments you really put a lot across in so few words.
Welcome!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Krulltar

crisp, clean, and precise…not muddled with poetic spacing or excessive wordy baggage.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
shadowlight

Very poetic, but I wish it went on a little longer. I love changing seasons and pieces written about changing seasons. Nice work on this. Oh, before I forget. Welcome.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5